Hey Bill....I just heard both versions, I have to tell ya that I agree with Jill, I like the first version better, for the same reason that Jill did...easier to listen to and I might add, it seemed that you were more relaxed or more into it naturaly..what I mean is you seemed more tense or pushing it to finish...the voice and vocals were
great IMHO on the first take, the second take appeared to be uneasy so to speak..hell
I don't know about the tech stuff..when I record, I have the tech guys do the stuff that needs to be done...I trust them and it always seems to work for me...also, you changed the lyrics on the second take and I'm not sure which I liked best....good showing...don't quit or give up, hang in there, I believe that you have talent and you should go for the gusto..get it all..
thanks for sharing.....
Tony Rome

[This message has been edited by Tony Rome (edited 08-10-2005).]