hi bill..
"..i'm a rockabilly rebel...." etc etc
mate i am not averse to rockabilly, or any other "category" of music. i like some but not all of pretty much anything ('cept billy joel and elton john of course)...i just think that your song does not suit that feel, your original idea was the best (ain't they always!!!!)for this narrative style lyric...you know "less is more"..thas all i meant.
i hope you enjoy your walk, it is such a nice thing to do!!!
cya
dennis