Listened to this three times...Random thoughts...

The song seems "fill happy"...

Nothing timing wise stood out to me in a bad way...

Construction wise, I'm hearing a bit of REM without the edge...

I wonder what this song would sound like, cleaned out, with a frenetic Early era Elvis Costello beat?

With the admittedly dated song writing style this tune doesn't work for me. Too much sugary sweetness, harmonies, background stuff...It's like a connection of cliches...

You're good at chord progressions. The changes aren't always what I expect.

What's the end game? What are your goals
with these tunes?




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Bill in Dayton