It depends on what you want the mix to play on....Listening with PC speakers...I like the original better..It shows more balance of all the instruments....

Your "EQ'd" version, as with most of your edited versions, cut the bass too much and over do the highs...changing the balance of ethic instruments...

Now what you hear on your monitors, and your ears....may be what you like..but others I am sure have different taste..

EQ can severely change the balance that the composer intended to be heard..