Persistence is rewarded and I was able to download from your last link. Very slowly though, (9kb/s) compared with my usual download speed of around 500kb/s.
Loved it but discovered another software thing. Played it through the Nero player (which had grabbed the MP3 extension)and it was acceptable. Then decided to play it through Windows Media Player and it sounded much better.
Enjoyed listening but felt it should go a little slower (more measured pace). However I also have been toying with this piece for 15 years or so and I guess one builds in ones' own pace comfort zone. Given that a lot of our music playing (like driving a car) comes out of the sub-concious this is probably understandable.
Good work, you can be proud.