Ok honest opinions,

The arrangement musically is excellent, if not lacking a touch of expression. The cello sound you are trying to recreate has an almost constant volume level, perhaps more expression on the level to emulate the bowing would add more realism. Also there is a lack of fluidity between the interplay of the instruments. I would expect a tad more delay on the attacks, it sounds as though the notes are quantised and all seem to begin simultaneously.
Piano sound is very nice though, but too bright.. would be nice mellowed and a little bit softer. The string voices, despite lacking the rosin bowed character and woodiness of the real thing do have a stringy character which comes through, mainly through your excellent arrangement. A touch more vibrato would be nice and a little more reverb on the string voices.

Regards,
Simon


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