Nice composition work Squeak,
Personally I would make the strings less
prominent, but that is my personal taste.

It reminds also to some small pieces I made while testing the K2600.
If you like I can send them to you.
(If I can find them though as I forgot how I named them, but should be on my network somewhere.)
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Keyboards/Sound Units: Kurzweil 2600S, Roland VR-760, Acces Virus C, Roland G-800, Akai AX60, Minimoog, Machine Drum, Roland R8-M, mediastation x-76