Hi Squeak,
Sounds good. I wonder what keyboard delivers this natural sound? Is this the WK3700?
In my opinion a sweet oboe would add even more romantic atmosphere, and a bassoon and French Horns.

I think your song will sound better if you avoid parallel 5ths.

Best regards,
George

P.S. It is a mystery but I managed to download your song from yousendit but I couldn't download BEBOP's