Oops, I didn't know anyone had replied. Thanks, Bill.

This is just a rough demo and I dang sure don't know what I'm doing, recording-wise. Slowly learning how to twist some knobs.

I've done a re-write to tighten up a few phrases, some minor tweaking, changed a line or two. I'll consider everything you said. I don't know if it needs a bridge. I get tired of the same old, same old... verse / chorus / verse / chorus / bridge / break / chorus. Somes songs don't need a bridge. I'll ponder on that.

I did is just for a rough demo to get the song across.