Bill-

I enjoyed "Questions" quite a bit. Your voice very much suits that kind of material.

From a critical point of view, I'd offer two suggestions to consider:

1) Develop a bridge or C section to break up the verses. Other than they lyrics, there's not much that reveals the beginning, middle or end of the piece. Commonly, a tune will grow and develop through the course of its length. Consider a more spare strumming style for the 1st verse or so...then into a finger picking style, then by the end, all out strumming perhaps? Adding a bridge or possible a key change would make this nice tune even better.

2) Recording wise, it seems the vocal is a tad hot for the guitar. It seems to me that the guitar is NOT loud enough in the mix, rather than saying the vocal is too loud.

Only other thought woudl be to add a touch more reverb to your vocal...just a bit...not much...

Good work!

Bill in Dayton
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Bill in Dayton