Hi Have been looking at song the sound is very good , the key changes are very good and the into fits very well the only thing I find tat lets the performance down is the ending.I have listened to the original and think the best option is to use the fade out as this is closer to the original.
P.S. the English for the "Santa's Piano with no strings is very good perhaps a little reworking to make it more English may be possible but at the moment it is very understandable as it is so may be for Xmas 2010 a new translation but do not worry for now.
I hope you and your family have a merry Christmas and a happy new year
Regards John,Diane and family
P.S. Happy Christmas to all Zoner's too!!!!