Maybe you don't even need a new page just put up the brief descriptive paragraph on top, like I said with a larger or different font, then add a line like " to see more of my story read on" and then separate it by using a couple of spaces and a smaller font for the text.
I think it could work that it's all on one page, as long as the first thing I see draws me in.

I would take the last paragraph maybe expand it a little , make it larger, and use that first.



[This message has been edited by mikeathome1 (edited 04-15-2008).]