Tony,
Had a couple of listens....the clarity is much better, 100% improved. Everything sounds crisp and clean. The only suggestion on this particular piece I would have is that the balance in the mix is just slightly off to me. The guitar is a bit loud compared to the drums and I thought the drums could use a bit more punch to them for this style of tune. So my thoughts over all would be drop the guitar back just a bit, add a bit of volume, bass and treble to the percussion track(s).

As far as the critique......well, I like your minor key pieces better myself, they're more moody and evoke more emotion in me. Not a bad tune at all, I just like the others better.
Terry

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jam on,
Terry http://imjazzed.homestead.com/Index.html

[This message has been edited by trtjazz (edited 05-23-2003).]