Hi Tony

Thanks for getting new inspiration

The tune and the arrangement definitely one of your best to date. This is a strong melody which stays a long time in the mind afterwards.
I would have liked to hear a stronger vocal from you, the accompaniment from the guitar is splendid but just tends to drown out your special voice. Actually, I would prefer you to raise the volume of the vocal rather than take down the accmpt., because your guitar playing is top notch.
In actual fact, before I typed this mail, I was in the middle of downloading some mp3's of Damien Rice from his album "O" and as I was listening to the track"Cannonball", I realised how close his voice was to yours at the start of the track. He does later on the track raise the volume of his voice, which gives it a real something.
I believe your special voice requires more space on your mp3.
cheers
Eddie J

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Eddie from Rotherham
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