Morning all

Just recorded and mixed, I would be grateful once again for some constructive criticism, thank you.

https://app.box.com/s/i7r5sd82qn0opgdrycpd

Kind Regards

Col

Hi Colin,
I really enjoyed your laid back version of the song. I thought the use of the harmonies was right on too. Don't know how it gets much better.
Added it to my play list.

Deane

I thought this was great recording. Your voice sounds really good. Only constructive criticism is that personally I would back off the volumes on the harmony voices just a bit.
I've never heard this song; it's a good one.
DonM

Hi Deane and Don

Thanks' for the comments, I agree with you Don listening again I got the harmony a tad heavy, also possibly the Bass, using Cubase it's easy to change.

Don, the song was written by Johnny Cash on a visit to Ireland, I have been performing it for the old folks for quite a while, it always goes down well.

I've given it a quick tweak

https://app.box.com/s/i7r5sd82qn0opgdrycpd

This is a version by a very popular Irish singer.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5r6o_if2BNs

Regards

Col

I enjoyed it also Col...maybe a 1/2 key modulation towards the end to ggive the song some lift I would say..

Colin,

I listened to your original and the first thing I heard was an off sounding background note (but not a wrong one) or chord just 2 or three seconds into the song. The rest was good, but WOW, your second take was superb! You made so many subtle vocal changes from the first take that for me it transformed the performance.

I'm a Scot but have travelled on business quite a lot in the Republic of Ireland. Your singing would be so welcomed in their pubs and clubs.

I look forward to hearing much more!

Ian

You can find more of Colin's tunes over here

http://www.csssongs.com/index.php/component/muscol/S/8-saswick/25-for-the-good-times?Itemid=101

I do enjoy his music, it seems to be of my era......

Ron