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#231787 - 04/09/08 08:06 PM Opinions for my logo
chony Offline
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I had a friend design me a logo and he came up with three drafts. I wanted to get some opinions from SZ members.

Its important that the logo has synergy - ie: that it flows, is effective, and easy to read.

Can you think of any changes that would make any of them better?

Thanks, Chony

Here are the three versions:





[This message has been edited by chony (edited 04-09-2008).]

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#231788 - 04/09/08 08:20 PM Re: Opinions for my logo
mikey_maestro Offline
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I lovee second one with the piano, My only concern is That people who don't know you already by name may not realize the piano image represents the letter "o"

As far as the look It Screams "I'm a Pro"
Very elegant anf Classy

Good Luck with it!

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#231789 - 04/09/08 08:26 PM Re: Opinions for my logo
John DiLeo Offline
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I agree with Mike....put the O back in....its too confusing the way it is IMO.

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#231790 - 04/09/08 11:05 PM Re: Opinions for my logo
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i also agree with mikey and john. make the "o" visible. it was only because i knew it was suppose to be "o" that i understood the name, otherwise seems like a C.H. guy from NY.

other than that, very nice!
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#231791 - 04/09/08 11:17 PM Re: Opinions for my logo
chony Offline
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Quote:
Originally posted by adimatis:
i also agree with mikey and john. make the "o" visible. it was only because i knew it was suppose to be "o" that i understood the name, otherwise seems like a C.H. guy from NY.

other than that, very nice!


I'm assuming you guys are talking about all three - not just the middle one. Is that right?

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#231792 - 04/10/08 12:24 AM Re: Opinions for my logo
adimatis Offline
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well... especially the middle one.
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#231793 - 04/10/08 03:10 AM Re: Opinions for my logo
ianmcnll Offline
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I agree with the others...put the "O" back in properly.

It looks like "CH & NY"(or CH and NY) in the first and third, and the second one isn't a whole lot better.

The font and the rest are very nice.

Ian
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#231794 - 04/10/08 06:36 AM Re: Opinions for my logo
tony mads usa Offline
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Perhaps make the bottom loop on the treble clef more like an O and overlay it with the same font as the rest of your name ...
In the second one you could just put the O in the piano, in the third one you could make the treble clef a different color - like the small blue clef imbedded in the larger one - and, again, have the lower loop the same color (in this case, black)as the rest of your name ...
I like the basic premise, though ...
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#231795 - 04/10/08 06:41 AM Re: Opinions for my logo
John DiLeo Offline
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Also I think the words Orchestras & Studios confuses people if they only see a OMB playing? Leaving them saying....

"Wheres the Orchestra"?

[This message has been edited by John DiLeo (edited 04-10-2008).]

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#231796 - 04/10/08 06:49 AM Re: Opinions for my logo
korg4god Offline
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Registered: 12/22/05
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Loc: Dodge City, Kansas 67801
Here's my $.02

Try making the middle "O" into a whole note and incorporate a staff, kinf of like the first example.


Just thinkin' out loud,

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