Steve, Much better! The only thing I would suggest is raise the volume of “ask the credit cowboy” at the end. It seems to get buried.
Good job!
JM
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Jingleman
HI
I have raised the volume but will try more. the end is a part of the jingle so I cannot redo it. Got me thinking if I raise volume it may be too unnatural.....So..... I think I will punch that line in vocally and ADD it and add reverb and pan it differently? At the very least think I will try copying the end part 2 more times and panning and adding delay and reverb. Thanks for the input because I would rather address now