Hi Squeak,
My honest opinion:
I like your voice, but the song....well...to be honest, the song sucks.
Sorry, but even Country Music has a little diversion in the flow of a song, but this was like a broken record...it just kept repeating the same verse with different words..over, and over. Way too repetious, which could be boring to the listener.
Now your voice has a lot of poetential for Country Music. It's a voice that reminds me of "Old Country" I would like to hear a recording by you of a well known Country Song. Maybe something by Waylon Jennings, as your voice is similiar. And that is a compliment.
I hope I didn't offend you, but you asked for honesty, and again my first impression was "Nice Voice on a Bad Song".
Thanks for having the courage to try something new, and then have the broad shoulders needed to accept critism. I admire that.
I look forward to more songs from you.
Larry
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Larry "Hawk"
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