Terry,

I enjoyed the melody..but there is still something about the vocals that makes it NOT Crisp and Clear to my ear. It sounds muddled and has a tunnel effect to it putng it in the background like Don M stated in his post..
What EFX are you using if I may ask, chorus comes to mind?? I'd like to hear this tune done with lead vocals set at just a bit of reverb and a very short delay with nothing else on your voice. I'm only being honest here.

jam on



[This message has been edited by Dnj (edited 01-01-2004).]