Well, as far as coherence, I believe that is a matter of personal perception. To me they seem coherent, may not to others though,
Its kind of wierd making a recording of it. I tried doing it but my inspiration seems to dissappear when I know that the mic is on and i am recording myself. I become a little uptight. It comes out much better and fluidly when I just do it out of the blue, unprepared. Preparing to record it seems to kill the whole feeling, the instinct dissappears and I start thinking, which just kills it.
I will try to make some kind of recording though. Might try to keep the mic running and hopefully forget that it is and maybe something comes out.


Thanks for the input all.

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We are all born uncultured like animals. Then as we grow up we learn our limits, and realize the importance of the smallest of things. Keeping this in mind, the future is in our hands, not our childrens. We have the power to make the next generation of humans "animals" or well-cultured, respectful (to the environment and the little things like family), and decent human beings.