Hey Renig,
Very nice, You could bring the vocals a little more into the mix but not too much as I think you would lose the impact of the rythmic backing.
It's a personal thing but I would substitute the bass sound with a more percusive one as it sounds a tad on the "boomy" side.
But a really nice job - Just shows you that you don't need the latest toys to get a really good result.
Thanks for sharing - Hoping to hear more
KFingers (Keith)