Scott,
I can't comment on the song itself, since I am a complete stranger to this kind of music. I dare say that I don't like this music very much, the same way that others don't like heavy metal or country.

But I heard this an other songs you have posted here and I realise that you provide a very refined end result in your performances. They "feel" like a CD, in the sense that I feel they are "consistent" with each other. By "consistent" I don't mean they sound the same but that they have certain aspects and qualities that characterize them and make them part of a bigger scheme.

I can't elaborate further since my English are not that good, and I have been drinking beer, but simply put down, my opinion is positive.
Theodore