Unless you've got a good high tenor voice, you might want to transpose down to C..... the melody at 'If you like making love at (G)midnight' goes to a high B!

You might also try an F#m7(b5) at the end of each 4 bar phrase, to take you back to the G (still in the key of D), for instance, over the 'worn out' before 'recording'. It really helps nail the tune.