Terry,
I like the intro- but if I may offer my 'opinion', to my ears the entry point for the bass drum seemed just a bit out of tempo? I felt that as I was listening to the guitar strumming.

Also I have this urge to add a semy breathy/floating picollo/fluteish melody on top of it. I think if you can add a couple chords for like a chorus and bridge it back to the main theme I think it'll be awesome (not that it's not awesome now )

KN