Warning: folk song and it's guitar/vocal

If anyone here can handle a singer-songwriter, folk song... please let me know if you find merit in this song or if you have any comments whatsoever. I wrote this in the past 24 hours.

Taylor baritone 8-string, yet strung with 13-58's with .11 and .09 octave strings, so that I can tune it D to D. Using cut capo on 2nd fret. Got that? Haha... A minor is what it is.

Recorded "live," one track into Zoom H4, using onboard stereo mics, tweaked in Kristal. (Rough demo)

First song: http://www.ttmbandroom.com/Bill_Pittman/audio.php
The lyric is clickable somewhere on that page.

EDIT: For lyric, click on "Info" on right side, then "Song Lyric."

[This message has been edited by SemiLiveMusic (edited 03-31-2010).]
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