Here's a silly traditional country style song I did on the Audya. Too much reverb on vocal but it's decent.

Let me know if you like this song. Or hate it. Really, I do need to know if people like it. As a songwriter, I simply HAVE to get honest feedback.

Song was written about my neighbor, Billy, who did survive and is none the worse for wear but it was very dangerous surgery. I entitled this thread "Joe Lee's Got An Aneurism" because our musician friend, Joe Lee Richards, who plays mean guitar and also has a Ketron Midjay, also had an aneurism. He lived, too, haha, so, maybe I should record a version for him. He'd hopefully get a kick out of it.

I would like to know if you find this humorous. A professional critic told me it's only mildly humorous and heck, I think it's rather funny. But, I'm jaded, as I wrote it. Again, I need honest feedback.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8648166

EDIT: This is a 128kbps mp3... the original wav was not this bad, vocally.

BILLY'S GOT AN ANEURISM
(copr)2007 Bill Pittman

Billy's got an aneurism, it's internal terrorism
Let's hope he's had baptism, everybody pray
Wife and daughter scared to death, sorry, Billy, I said death
You just breathe a lot of breaths, it's gon' be okay

[CHORUS:]
Pray, brother, pray
Pray, sister, pray
We'll keep that Reaper at bay
Pray, pray, pray

Ain't no need for pessimism, they gon' get the aneurism
You should think futurism, come on Billy, try
But word is there's a little catch if you let this make you a wreck
Limber up and start to stretch and kiss your butt Goodbye

[ CHORUS - REPEAT ]

Yeah, life is full of ups and downs, sorry, Billy, I said down
Come on, man, wipe that frown, negative won't do
Listen Billy, this is key, if you wake up, try to pee
If bed is wet, glory be, you have made it through

[ CHORUS - REPEAT ]
You'll see another day
Pray, pray, pray

[This message has been edited by SemiLiveMusic (edited 01-20-2010).]