I wrote this song about a week ago, played this song at my friend's funeral (the man in the song), so I have feedback from locals, but please let me know how this song strikes you, as you do not know the deceased. Does it do anything for you?

I played it at his funeral a few days ago, and wow, that was hard. He was a good guy. This was done on my Gibson Gospel guitar and I really didn't flub up until about the next to last note, wouldn't you know it! But, doesn't matter, just a rough demo. Let me know how it sounds, too, as I am no expert recorder.

Thanks for feedback, good or bad. I need feedback from people who do not know him. As always, trying to gauge a song's strength. Thanks for taking your time to listen and comment.

http://www.reverbnat...ow/song_8331568

(You might have to wait a minute for the song to load.)

Something is wrong with the link in the OP and I can't edit it.

LINK:
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_8331568

I like it a lot Bill.
Don