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#454166 - 06/30/18 01:35 PM Working Man
Terrysutt Offline
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Registered: 08/07/17
Posts: 420
Loc: United Kingdom
I decided to create an upbeat version of Rita Macneil`s Working Man,I`ve added an intro between each verse to lengthen the song to allow for any dancers.


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Working Man.mp3 (38 downloads)


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#454170 - 06/30/18 04:00 PM Re: Working Man [Re: Terrysutt]
cgiles Offline
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Registered: 09/29/05
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Terry, sounds like you're 'rushing' the melody a little. Relax, tap your foot to the beat, and let the melody FLOWWWWwww. Also, why not just play it live (since you're using styles) and that way you can control the length as needed. Just suggestions, nice effort.

chas
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#454186 - 07/01/18 06:55 AM Re: Working Man [Re: cgiles]
Dnj Offline
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Registered: 09/21/00
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Originally Posted By cgiles
Terry, sounds like you're 'rushing' the melody a little. Relax, tap your foot to the beat, and let the melody FLOWWWWwww. Also, why not just play it live (since you're using styles) and that way you can control the length as needed. Just suggestions, nice effort.

chas



ditto what Chas said. Watch your timing.

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#454188 - 07/01/18 07:25 AM Re: Working Man [Re: Terrysutt]
Bill Lewis Offline
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Not familiar with the song but good playing. Maybe vary the solo sound on the second verse . Nice happy feel to it.
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