Nice Don, I heard a lot of “you” in that. Sounds just fine as an instrumental but you could easily add some lyrics. A song needs a good melody , and your melody is catchy....

Funny last night night I took my daughter out teaching her to drive. On the oldies station they played Chuck Mangione “ Feels so Good” and I started telling her when I was a kid there were still instrumental hits songs on radio. I can’t remember the last big instrumental hit,

Google tells me it was “ The Harlem Shake “ from 2013. Hardly a melodic song though....