I hear you Chas. Good playing, Nice. Now that we have that out of the way let’s talk about the chords.

Because it is 6AM, I just listened to the beginning, will listen to the rest of the song later, when I am awake.

BUT, I love that word. (Smile) The song starts minor chord, same with Cry Me a River, Body and Soul, and many others. I believe that one of the reasons these songs became popular is how they are treating that minor chord.

Example when playing in a minor key:
The movement of a C minor:

1-C E G, lower note is C
2-C E G B lower note is B
3-C E G Bb lower note is Bb
4-C E G A lower note is A
4-Sometimes you can start with C E G D lower note is D, this will add more tension.

Listen to the original songs and you will hear the movement. This is better than playing a Cm chord with no movement.

Sometimes I use the movement to end a song (in a minor key) and start with these moving tones. Cm chord – the moving notes, G G# A – then I end with a Cm6 chord.

Chords should be telling a story, that adds so much to any song. And there goes two finger chords. ooops.

Chas, record the song again with a minor chord movement, your solo and style are good. The feeling you but into the song says a lot, nice.
John C.