Terry,
As you are trying to re-produce the original version I would say, less reverb on the vocals and perhaps a more percussive kind of drums in the background. Well done though, thanks for sharing.
As I hardly ever performed publicly I recorded this song more than 10 years ago with a completely different arrangement, after all that is what arranger keyboards are for. It still resides on my youtube page, and was recorded with the KOrg PA50
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZvgawOFiB8

regards
John