Terry I just listened to your song twice these are classic songs. But if I'm being honest you need to give more attention to your Vocal FX mix settings. At a minimum the reverb is drowning out your singing tremendously and needs to be cleaned up.
I would hope you agree with me just by listening to it?
There are a few ways you can record your vocals with the song, all in one shot is the most difficult as everything has to be perfect,
but if your home or in studio you can take your time recording the music tracks first & then the vocal tracks dry. Then afterwards add all your FX to the tracks so you have better control over your Voc mix with Reverb, Compression, delay, EQ, before mastering the entire mix. These are things to consider and not difficult to accomplish..
That said thank you for sharing your work and keep them coming.