Here's my second attempt. Trying to follow your suggestions. First thing I lowered the tune a half step. Transpose feature sure us nice! Tried to sing out a little more and was thinking about support. I used no mike at all on this. Sat the recorder on the kb and went for it. Again, don't tell me how good it is. I do believe I got rid of some of the pitchiness & used no pitch correction to do it! Tell me what else to work on to improve it. I'm going to keep at this until I get comfortable with posting my stuff because I'll know I'm getting better.
https://app.box.com/s/6tsoldo2c0n554fcnit0mzsn1wvgidr6