Morning, Guys:
I thought Eddie knocked Don's lyrics out of the park. Don, don't beat yourself up if you "borrowed" a line or phrase from something you wrote earlier. All of us do it... maybe not intentionally, it has something to do with our Musical DNA!
Now you have a melody from Eddie... so, when time permits, I hope you'll give the song a crack with your vocal and playing style. No, maybe not today... or even for the sake of this thread.
You owe it to yourself to take this thing "your way"... and don't forget to give Eddie "equal top billing" when it goes viral. Its always good to hear and compare two versions of the same song.
B-T-W... I received the nicest "thank you" note from Eddie and was amazed at his humility and sincerity. I was quick to let him know how good I think he did with his unique vocal and skill at writing great melodies. We are a lucky bunch here.
Have a great day, ----West Mayberry Dave