Hi again, Sergey:
Please don't let my negative comments about the music industry cause you any concern. I listened again, this time to "Paradise" and was equally impressed. Unless you plan to pursue a career as a concert pianist... I think you are a terrific composer. In that capacity, I would seek to find an organization that will represent your work in seeking placements in films and commercials.
I hope this helps... and at least provides you with encouragement.
All the best, ----Dave Rice