Don, since you posted this song here, I assume you are open to having it critiqued. Anyway, I hope so. First, the good: the VOCALS were good, actually, VERY good. You seem to have a good feel for this song and do a good job of getting it across.

Now for the not-so-good. The arranger backing. I'll list what I think could be areas of improvement. Bear in mind, though, this is only MY opinion (and we know what THAT'S worth ).

1. Way too repetitive (making it monotonous and not complimentary to the vocals). Use more breaks, fills, and variations. Add some color with the 'right hand'.

2. Make sure you play the CORRECT chords, including (and especially) passing or transitional chords. This keeps the arrangement from sounding 'amateurish'. Remember, the musical world is much larger than I, IIm, IV, and V. Most of the modern arrangers will handle more sophisticated chord structures very well. Experiment.

Remember, this is my opinion only and not meant to discourage in any way. You have a nice feel for the music and should try to maximize the capabilities of the Arranger KB to enhance your vocal performances. JMO and good luck and happy playing.

chas