Hi Dan, may I say there have been some excellent critiques and replies in this thread so far, so all I have left to say is - good job - nice feel and mood!

But - watch your Pitch - please!

I do understand the style you were going for in this song, a melancholy, laid back style, but don't be fooled, it still takes a certain Energy and Intensity to sustain this kind of Vocal and keep it interesting and in tune. You will hear what I'm talking about particularly in your first line "I am a Poor wayfaring stranger" and a little later in "this world of War (?)" and "in that Bright Land" and the notes you bend vocally throughout the song.

Vocals are my main focus generally speaking, so I notice this sort of thing straight away.

...and yeah - great Sax work!

P.S. I see you're ahead of your time (in the MP3 Info, you put the year of this track at 2209... !)