Diki's advice is spot on!

But Larry, let me say that your song and your music are very good. I haven't written many songs, but those I have are more similar to your style than to today's music, as Diki would say. My explanation for that is that my mind is thinking keyboard and melody all the time, certainly not what we hear on air today. Take Diki's advice to heart, but let it fuel you to make something completely different and outstanding. As I said, your music is good and enjoyable and getting better all the time. The guitar solo was very excellent, but kind of buried; bring it more out front and beef it up.
Actually, I think your music is kind of American Idol music - pop with a little rock flavor and a decent melody.