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Originally posted by beachbum:

Ok, you hated the last original tune, on me 900.. Here are 2 more new originals on the 900.. someone has to have something nice to say about one of them... If you have a chance, http://chipos.com
just click the play button on the bottom left..
New tunes are
Sky is falling
Take my breathe away..
You can make originals..I'm on about the 60th now

Thanks, if you have the time.


I like what you've done. Original tunes and nicely performed, but a few suggestions:

1 - Take down the Hi EQ on your voice, it is very sharp to the ear.

2 - Perhaps try singing a few notes lower. Based on my experience with singers, I think that your voice's sweet spot is probably down a few notes.

Good luck!