Another good song... Love your voice!

But I still think it's time to take this stuff to the next level. At least BFD for the drums if you can't get into a studio and use the real thing. Real basslines (maybe a real bassist!), all real guitars, replace out all the arranger parts...

This is REALLY good for an arranger, but it could have SO much more dynamics and realism by going the real route. Use the arranger version as the mock-up, but replace ALL the parts. The music, IMO, really deserves it... (that IS a compliment, trust me! )

You can hear just HOW much better it has gotten just by using a real guitarist. Now imagine how much better it gets with a real bassist, real drums (or BFD, which is pretty darn close!)...

And it's nice to hear something other than 'golden oldies'! Kudos!