Majik,

Thanks a lot for the review. Yes this song is by no means complete. The drum track is a loop from the 808' s demo disk. It will be redone, with fills, cymbals, and some poly rythme Hi Hat and/or shakers, but with same groove. My bandmate who does the lyrics always has something sophisticated and clever for every song.
I am really happy you picked up on the "possesive" feel flow of the song. That is something we strive for. It is like going on a journey.
About the time, yeah it maybe a little long for commercial radio or video, but personally I like it. And it could always change, but that will really depend on the vocals.
When we get more of final mix together I' ll post a link. Do you have any songs on the web? I am interested to hear what you are doing.
thanks again
Ian