Mikey,

"Mikey plays/sings YOUR kid's favorite songs like they never heard them before, making his keyboard sound like a real 16-piece band!"

- since you are addressing parents I think you should add "your" to make them think you are referring to their special snowflake.
NOTE: If you expect that the leaflets are going to be read by kids, (flashy colours etc) then add the word "kids" to attract them, and possibly make them to press their parents for your leaflet

- NEVER mention the word "organ" or derivatives like "my organ" or "Mikey's organ" either in talking or in print within 1000 words before or after the word "kids". No need to explain why. Sometimes things like that get overlooked...

good luck.
Trident



[This message has been edited by trident (edited 03-05-2008).]