DJ
For me, though I do understand what you are saying here and try not to even repeat the same word 2x's in a verse.....sometimes a cut calls for it depending on what it is you are trying to say.

My latest on my site has a cut that the beginning of each line (except for the chorus) starts with "So many" that is the theme of the cut though and is what I felt was needed to express what it is I was trying to say.

If you take your thoughts a bit further to the larger picture of a complete cut, the chorus is an exact repeat of the previous chorus.

Terry

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Terry http://imjazzed.homestead.com/Index.html