Theodore,
I am glad that on this Forum we are finally discussing music again!
Speaking of the song you posted, I have to say that I don't like much the style you choosed, because it's maybe too "heavy"; furthermore, I think that you should change the drum set you used, because that snare is a bit loud and annoying. Have you tried with a brush kit?
I have, on the other hand, to say that the Tenor Sax sounded really good and had the right amount of "guts".
Speaking finally of the "player" , I think that you rendition was flawless, with the right amount of feeling. I am sure that you could add some "embellishments", like a 9th here and there, but since I don't know this song well I will leave this kind of comments to somebody else.
All in all, a very good rendition!
Efxaristò
Kali emera!
Andrea
(a "greek" name!)