Good version and good singing. I could sit in a bar and listen to you for hours.
And don't worry about the flamers from your first attempts. Remember that Lucille Ball's first acting teacher begged her to drop out because he said that she couldn't act her way out of a paper bag and COL Sanders had three bankruptcies before he started selling chicken.
I'm going to check out your originals...
BTW, for those who are curious, I'm a newbie deciding which arranger to buy and this is my first post.
Love the forum!
- Dan