Hey, Jill, what a good work!

I know that styles mostly sound artificial and cheesy but nevertheless you did a good job with your voice - it was a live take without using any tracks. I know that this is a hard discipline!
I also agree with the too much effect setting. And like you mentioned it the voice level was a little bit to loud. But that's normal for a first recording...

I know your next ones will be way better!!!

It's a personal opinion to say wether somebody's looking good or not. But in my opinion the guys who voted that you're looking good are absolutely right!
To succeed in showbiz you won't need only musical talent - you'll also need charisma! I think that you have both!!!

Keep on that good work!!!

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Greetings from Frankfurt (Germany),
Sheriff ;-)
[This message has been edited by Sheriff (edited 07-29-2005).]