Just an observation... A problem with adding a bridge to this song is that it is 3:48 as is and there are only brief breaks. A bridge would add 30 to 45 seconds. I don't hear the need for a bridge but I'm open to any suggestions. It would have to need it really bad to add 30 to 45 seconds to it.

A guy just responded on another forum that "I wish you enough" is not enough, that it's kind of like derogatory to only wish someone enough. I'm thinking "Did you listen to the chorus? The entire chorus is written about what enough is!"

A memorable hook is invaluable in songwriting and over the years, I kept coming back to this song to work on it because I thought it was a good hook... it's unique.

I don't know, maybe it's not so special but I love playing this song. I *really* like this song. I've had a couple of responses that make me think about this and that; haha, I thought it was pretty close. I guess more rewriting is due. This song has a shipload of hours into it. It ain't easy!

As always, honest feedback is appreciated.

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Bill
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