I felt that after the initial grounding of the riff had passed, it tended to lose a bit of direction, also some of the note clusters were very played very un-guitar like, it really showed what can be done on keys that guitarist's would find hard to play, for that I congratulate you. Sadly there are many things you can on a guitar that you cant do on keys.

Rgds

NJ

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Originally posted by Eric, B:
Hi Jerry,

first off I really like your song, very catchy easy going tune.
However I think your best version so far is the one with flute and accustic guitar.

Somehow the distorted guitar doesn't fit your song and doesn't do it justice.

I don't know, but somehow it is an accustic kind of song.

Thanks for sharing.

Eric