Bill
As you said, it's is a rough working mix, that aside, I thought the melody was excellent.Lyrics were great. I think you should consider doing it in a country genre, as that is immediately what I heard and think the concept, style and lyrics are made for it.

The vocals were off by a semi tone here and there but overall, I found myself singing along to it.
jam on,
Terry

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jam on,
Terry http://www.musicchops.com/forums/



[This message has been edited by trtjazz (edited 09-06-2005).]