Squeak: I personally think your work holds good promise, but to be honest, you've not shared much about it yet. So far, I like the lyric content and rhythmic groove, but because I've not hear its begining (verse) any development/contrast (bridge), or a defining hook line (yet), or ending, I believe it's far too early to give you a qualified opinion or advice on the song itself. I recommend re-posting it once you've completed the basic melodic/choral structure (verse/chorus + bridge?) of the song. I also recommend not wasting time attempting to label what music genre your music falls under. Instead, just continue making your music your own, and let it define itself. Good luck. - Scott